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  1. Surprisingly good for a story on a blog. Very well-written. I like the way you built the world of the story without explaining every detail – the story explained the futuristic details when we needed to know them, but not in a tedious way that seemed explanatory, if you know what I mean. You made me care about Nelson. And the ending was satisfying. Well done.

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